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You asked me if you
could get me anything: just
some serenity.
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I need a little quiet and a soft place to lay my head.
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=) the feel of the word 'serenity' penetrates through. its almost like a whisper. nice piece.

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Full-stop at the end, perhaps? Hehe. The first "me" seems like an excess word - used to simply fill the missing syllable. That's my only qualm. :)

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Why thank you. :)

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Yes. I will be needing some hard serenity soon here.

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Ah yes, me and my forgotten full stops... Thanks for the comment!

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