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I need a little quiet and a soft place to lay my head.

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:iconevcfenix:
=) the feel of the word 'serenity' penetrates through. its almost like a whisper. nice piece.

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:iconyouinventedme:
make mine a double

xo!

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:icon007-crazynloveless:
Full-stop at the end, perhaps? Hehe. The first "me" seems like an excess word - used to simply fill the missing syllable. That's my only qualm. :)

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:icon007-fleetingpassions:
Why thank you. :)

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:icon007-fleetingpassions:
Yes. I will be needing some hard serenity soon here.

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:icon007-fleetingpassions:
Ah yes, me and my forgotten full stops... Thanks for the comment!

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